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positives....
-love the 1st riff!!
-nice wide bass.
-the energy in the big breakdown is wkd.
-nice break mate!!
-nice job on the sweeps mate. especially the delays. makes the transitions spot on!
possible criticisms....
-ya can hear some issues with the e.q like. im also havin troubles gettin that spot on. its not that bad though. just a little bit of work to do there
-maybe the middle of the track gets a bit lost, possibly add a hat loop, or another one if there is one already there.
thats about it mate. nice 1
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georgekadar (29/07/2010)
positives....
-love the 1st riff!!
-nice wide bass.
-the energy in the big breakdown is wkd.
-nice break mate!!
-nice job on the sweeps mate. especially the delays. makes the transitions spot on!
possible criticisms....
-ya can hear some issues with the e.q like. im also havin troubles gettin that spot on. its not that bad though. just a little bit of work to do there
-maybe the middle of the track gets a bit lost, possibly add a hat loop, or another one if there is one already there.
thats about it mate. nice 1
Cheers mate! Did you listen past the 6.42 mark when the main riff from the build up comes back in.... a bit diffrent from most tech trance I think?
Yeah few EQ issues to iron out.. when you say in the middle of the track are you talking abut the build up section or after it kicks it?
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can you see on the waveform between the 2 breaks??
that bit!!!
like i mean after it really kicks off, maybe it starts gettin lost toward the big break??
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| what synths do u use for trance wayne??
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sylenth, nexus and vangard mainly.... got loads more but havent really used them to much. sylenth seems to be my fav the now but only because of this site.
before I got ableton I used the subtractor and the malstrum on reason but was no where near as good on reason as I am with ableton.
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Really really nice buddy!
Nice breakdown and solid build to a wicked drop! You polish this up a good un and i could see it getting signed.
Points of concern:
I did feel the break / build up went on a little too long, remember people have a short attention span, especially on the dancefloor.
The high end / mids needs brightening up a bit.
Otherwise really solid production dude, very nice!
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roben (30/07/2010)
Really really nice buddy!
Nice breakdown and solid build to a wicked drop! You polish this up a good un and i could see it getting signed.
Points of concern:
I did feel the break / build up went on a little too long, remember people have a short attention span, especially on the dancefloor.
The high end / mids needs brightening up a bit.
Otherwise really solid production dude, very nice!
Thanks for the feedback mate! Yeah, EQ is key I think, maybe its just me but dont you think the bass drum could be more outstandish as well?
Will go back over the EQing tomorrow.
And yeah, very very good point about peoples attention span! Will rebuild the build up a little too.
Thanks for the feedback so far guys 
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Awesome mate. I love it!  . I kind of like the long break to be honest with you. It adds such a release when your main bit really kicks in.
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