Hi there @wingx
You did a good job with the vocals IMO, the arrangement is quite original but personally, I don't cope with the intro, I prefer the way it starts at around 0:35 and you have a harsh transient/sybilling resonance with the vocals right at the start of the track. Find the transition and change in the track starting from 2:01 a bit abrupt and radical in terms of tonal balance, it sounds very clean and in a higher frequency range than the first part where you have noise & effects going on and a kick sounding quite boomy.
Some midi notes in the lead synth seems too much off grid to my listening ( example at 4:54 but it happens several time ) and I found it disturbing.
Not sure about the progression of the track, your bringing and taking out a lot of energy, I'm missing build up and drop and joy time classic progression of a Trance track here, but that's my listening feeling of course
So again the parts after 2:00 sounds clearer and better in term of mixing than the intro, keep it that way but perhaps some arrangement & song structure could be review IMO.
Hope this helps & good luck