Nice rework , much more clarity in this version.
At least it's already nice to have this laptop, if you travel a lot it's always great to be able to make some music, better than reading books IMO
I'm really digging the groove of this one, the foundation of the track is really cool.
Some "glitchy" elements are jumping in to some quite surprising timing, but well, writing this, I know myself and that I have a kind of "rigid" sense of rhythm
I would have seen a really minimal break around the 3/4 of the track, maybe just a background synth layer and some bass notes, just my extrapolation on the track, LOL.
But yep, cool groove & feel, it's chill, a bit funk, not really a 80's sounding but some essence of it with a much more modern touch. Nice one overall