Hey there @fred29
Another nice track with great synths sounds that are building well overtime, there's definitely a nice blend of arps & pads that give a nice feel to the track, fx sounds are nice too. Adding some more effects like reverb, chorus, delays to spread the track in stereo and make it sound more full could be polished, but it seems that you're more at ease with synths after listening to several of your tracks here
The weak point for me is the bass & kick and especially the bass in this track. It sounds crushed and a bit muddy and next to this the pattern is very linear and it's not helping with the listening experience overtime. For the kick there's a kind of metallic sound to it that for me doesn't work well and again, strict 4x4 pattern and that repeating clap/snare makes the beat less interesting. So question : do you start with Kick & Bass and build the melodic elements on top of them or the reverse way starting with melody & synths ? I think you're at a production stage where you need to focus on developing more solid drum & bass and break out from the linear patterns.
Another small suggestion for the vocals would be not to reveal the full vocals before the break but rather introduce it with effected small parts ( like what you did at around 3:42 for example ) in order to create a nice feel and give a reference to the listeners when it will come full during the break and towards part 2 of the track.
Like the track, but it could really be pushed further with kick & bass enhancement and a few tweaks in processing.
Hope this helps & you can submit your track for review on the Sonic Academy Live stream, there's now a direct link on the website to upload mp3 BTW : https://www.sonicacademy.com/live