Feedback on a progressive trance track

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Can you all give harsh feedback? I mean, the pickier the better :slight_smile: If the melody is just not suiting you, and neither is the chord progression, point it out and my feelings definitely won’t get hurt. I just checked the link so I know if works. Thanks! I’m more than happy to review one of your tracks as well if you post it here.br
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https://soundcloud.com/joshmasimore/proggressive-trance-feedback-1br
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Thanks!