Another nice track, always curious and surprised when you share a new one
Not sure about the bass, both in the very repeating and linear pattern and choice of sound. More dynamic and shorter, rounder bass with a tiny higher frequency element might fit the mix better. The very linear pattern would work well at a much more high tempo IMO, in this one it takes over the beats & other elements.
Lot's of mid range elements in the beat, was expecting more classical low toms fills, but again the bass is taking over the rhythmic elements for me, so it's a bit more difficult to judge.
Not sure about the stutter effect at 2:06 & 3:42, doesn't work for me, sounds really too much of a modern effect for the track, same goes with the sci-fi sound effect by the end of the track, quite surprising. That's just personal to my listening experience on this track, my brain wasn't able to compute those sounds and didn't find them nice in the mix, they've been identified as alien sounds belonging to another genre of music
Lot's of placement in space and use of panning, sounds nice and gives movement to the track but watch out not to spread too much Left or Right and to adjust levels. From a listening point, what I think is that it's quite pleasant when you just notice that a sound is panned but if too much obvious it can feel like the sounds don't blend well together and give a feeling of mixing issues.
The chorus on the guitar might be a tiny bit too wet as well, seems you have a reverb on it too, so too much of both effects can make this part sound distant & a bit weak, well that was the impression while listening. Maybe try to reduce those wet signal a tiny bit or maybe using an EQ after the effects to be able to fine adjust the sound.
That's it for me based on my listening(s), so as usual it's my very own perception of the track and what could ticked my ears