hehe. let's listen...
you have something really good here.
1. the kick. not my case. too hard, too simple. probably it's personal taste and i cannot really describe it but this exact kind of kick, it's too much for me.
2. i don't have much an idea of scales and keys, so this might sound very random and wrong. it gets a bit too repetitive and predictable. i would look for a chance to make it a bit more interesting, like throwing in something that you wouldn't expect : an a# major chord for example