New EDM track

Hi,

I already posted two tracks before, which were not so good. I made a new track. I think I improved upon my previous tracks, but I am not sure.

I am really interested in your feedback. I am doing this entirely alone, no music experts around me. Therefore, I really value your opinion. Also, if it is bad, you can say so! (I am used to it… :wink: )

Thanks!

The track can be found here:
https://soundcloud.com/user-837716620/g-major