Hey again @d4bk
So I'm currently taking a listening right now...
Like the long intro and the build, have you been influenced by "Avaritia" from Deadmau5 BTW ??
On the first listening my ears got confused by the sync of the beat & bass starting from 6:05 after the main break, I played it again and found the same, some sounds seems to be too much gated because of too pronounced side-chain effect maybe ?? Or is it a YT out of sync issue, have you checked with your original track if the YT playback was correct ?
For the rest it's an interesting track, like very much the organics atmo sounds you've used in it and the synths. Might be missing a tiny bit of low end since the overall track is very bright due to those synths & sounds but still, it's quite well balanced in terms of mixing.
But yea, nice track and sounds in there, one that might be polished a bit more but pleasant to listen