me gusta. listening to it, as a hobbyist, i make out two options for improvement: there is something with the space. maybe it's the drums but the bass and melodic tracks don't feel like can move freely. the start is perfect but suddenly it gets so narrow and the kick is all the time sucking you into a very narrow centered space.
arrangement: it's too tame, missing more volatility in the energy. i don't mean it should have a cheesy trance drop, more something like the string section in "knights of the jaguar" or the middle section of "azure". you expect it to move somewhere but it doesn't.