many things wrong with this track but i somehow like all the dirt, distortion and weird space and don't see a reason to fix it. or did i just listen too often to it which always makes things sound good and as they are meant to be this way?
well, after some days... it sounds terrible.
the song developed into this in the meantime and it did not get much better:
somewhere under all this mess lies a simple, pretty song, think it is time to give up and move on to the next song.
I really like the second iteration mate, got a vinyl crackle feel to it