Hey there @Lexwa87
Welcome then ! Since it's your 1st upload for some feedback
Bear in mind that this feedback is based on critical listening, so in a nutshell, I'll probably gonna try to highlight what's not working more than what's good, it's the best way to be constructive IMO, but you have to keep an open mind for taking it as well. We all spend a lot of time & efforts trying to make a track, often getting absorbed by the music and the song itself, so it's very common & easy to loose this critical sense of listening and becoming less objective. That's where other's feedback comes in and can be very handy
OK so let's start by some good elements here. First of all you have a song structure & arrangement, that's a good habit. I also like the melodic synths parts in the track, there's some movement going on with those elements which is adding interest to the track. That arpeggiated synth right from the start is very nice ( reminds me of Tale Of Us Remix of "Wake Me Up" from Cubicolor ). There's some modulation with the synth filter & levels, movement with panning which is nice & interesting. It's working well in the 1st part of the track but the notes pattern variation in the 2nd part are a bit confusing IMO, but it has to do with other instruments playing and not blending that well with this main synth line.
That other synth ( more like a lower pad ) you introduce during the break at around 2:10 doesn't play very well with the main synth, again creating confusion for the listener. Advice here is choice of sounds that already blend well together in terms of tune, frequencies and to be careful with notes choice & pattern variation. It's very good to make a track evolving, but sometime it's better to keep it subtle, the listener ears & mind need something to refer to, if the change is too drastic he's gonna loose focus & interest.
Rhythm wise, the kick is quite good, fitting this kind of track quite well. Other drums parts should be a bit louder since your synths are really taking the focus here. The patterns are also quite linear & static right now, very much ON the grid, more movement and organic feel would be welcome here.
Now for the elements that are not working in this track IMO, it's definitely that bass sound and the vocals. The bass doesn't work very well in the track and the pattern is not interesting, not sounding like a bass line at the moment, I would try other bass sound as well as coming up with a bass line pattern playing well with the rest of the track.
The vocals are rather off at the moment and they are also not very well in tune with the rest of the track but the main point here is timing, you have slow vocals fighting with fast arpeggios and that's again creating confusion. I'll be honest, it's always very hard to find good vocals for any track, unless you have access to a vocalist or being a singer yourself, then once you found the right vocals, having them sitting right & well mixed in a track can also be quite difficult. Don't know if you're producing for a long time, but I won't bother too much with adding vocals to my tracks if you're starting, get the music right first.
Here are some S.A tuts to check for the drums if you haven't watch those already, I think they are really interesting
How To Make Better Drums --> Enamour
Top 5 Tips For Creating Organic Drums --> Protoculture
Those other 2 tutorials from Enamour are also very good resources, especially in terms of song structure and ways to use different elements to create variations & keep the listener interested, but keeping them working well together.
Tech Tips Vol.52 is definitely a gold mine and for a full track approach do watch the How to Make Ruby course.
Those are in Ableton Live, do not know what's your DAW of choice, but all tuts are covering useful tips & techinques that you can apply in any other DAW.
So yep, some nice elements in this one but the track is missing a catchy bass line with a different sound, the melodic elements have to blend more and complete each-other instead of dueling and creating confusion for the listener, drums could be more interesting and have a more organic feel to them and the vocals are probably not sitting well for this track because of tune & especially timing.
Hope that can help