Hey there,
yesterday i´ve finished my new Track and would like to have some feedback so i can improve my skills. What do you think about it? Have nice day 
Hey @Bjoern_K
Will catch up on this one before the end of the week end since I’m in a middle of Studio & Computer re-installation here
Still need to go through monitors calibration & some other things before jumping back into critical listening comments …LOL
Will be updating my today comment when done
Catching up later on then 
Cheers !
Hey again @Bjoern_K
So I’m currently taking a listening right now…
Like the long intro and the build, have you been influenced by “Avaritia” from Deadmau5 BTW ??
On the first listening my ears got confused by the sync of the beat & bass starting from 6:05 after the main break, I played it again and found the same, some sounds seems to be too much gated because of too pronounced side-chain effect maybe ?? Or is it a YT out of sync issue, have you checked with your original track if the YT playback was correct ?
For the rest it’s an interesting track, like very much the organics atmo sounds you’ve used in it and the synths. Might be missing a tiny bit of low end since the overall track is very bright due to those synths & sounds but still, it’s quite well balanced in terms of mixing.
But yea, nice track and sounds in there, one that might be polished a bit more but pleasant to listen
Cheers !
it’s very deadmau5-ish, isn’t it? the long intro, the spherical sounds, the bit loose movement of the chords. for that not bad but i’m missing a bit the emotional payoff. something really memorable and “tacky”. also there is on my speakers a problem in the balancing, most obvious around 7:30.
i swear, i didn’t read tekalight’s comment mentioning deadmau5 before i wrote my comment. ^^
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Yep, there’s definitely something wrong from the drop after the break toward the end of the track, still opting for excessive use of side-chain / gate or maybe some samples delay inside the DAW if this is not due to the YT upload.
BTW @Bjoern_K , would be great to have a SoundCloud or similar platform audio file for feedback.