Hi there Evan !
Well, first of all I found your track great. Musically and arrangement wise it's a good trance track with most elements you could expect when listening to this genre. So that's already a very good work done !
Now, mixing & mastering wise, your track seems to suffer from 3 things for me, which are :
- the low end level ( affecting the general loudness level of the track )
- some unbalanced levels between your synths mid-range and your high end levels.
- Stereo placement or reverb or fx used on your high end atmosphere and Fx sounds ( linked to the second point as well )
This is after 2 listening in stereo, one on headphones and one on monitors, I need more accurate listening to confirm that.
Edit: I'm now moving my rather 2 long replies to PM for you to keep it more reading friendly for others here