Hi there @wingx
Quite a rich track in terms of elements, which makes it entertaining for the listener. I also found the progression & arrangement much better than in the last track feedback BTW, nice work for this part.
Now seriously, my only advice for now ( that's also what's preventing me to give precise mixing feedback ) is to really get your levels down, you're clipping in the red all the way with this one, it's overdone in terms of volume & loudness. Remember that in the digital world there's nothing above 0 dBFS, above this you're clipping, thus loosing audio information & introducing distortion. For the rest good work
There are many plugins out there to help you with LUFS metering, even free ones and this month the offline mix check tool Expose is free with any purchase by Plugin Boutique, it's also a nice tool to have in your arsenal IMO.
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