A composition from a new member

Hey I never posted here, so it’s my first post.

I made a track

SoundCloud - Hear the world’s sounds

I’m not a proffessional, so I would like some feedbacks from you guys. Thanks

the style is kinda minimal lounge. I think there are some problems in the arrangement. But if someone could take the time to listen and give me some tips I would really appreciate it. Thanks in advance

interesting work mate. Are you planning on extending it or leaving it at that length?

Maybe the only thing I would look at is varying the rhythm on the stutter edits. So, every 8 or 16 bars inserting a differently cut stutter for variety.

good work