A Track I started yesterday would love some feedback :)

[crane]

A Track I started yesterday would love some feedback :)br
https://soundcloud.com/podraig_123/podraig-crane-dutch-house

[crane]

Updated version …br
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https://soundcloud.com/podraigcrane/dutch-house-2013

[xpa]

Wrong section for feedback dude

[crane]

lol im new on these forms were do i post it?