Advice on WIP?

Looking to get some advice from experienced producers on my 2nd song :slight_smile: Any and all feedback and advice is very wanted and appreciated ^^

p.s it has no end yet

you really must give it a more natural feel because from what I can tell you are looking for a fluent , not robotic sound :

  • play with note velocity
  • take the fixed grid off and make notes shorter , longer , misplace them a bit

    In regard of composition,your piece is too repetitive.

    your white noises need to be worked out and the underlying bass is not really good.

    Thatโ€™s all the areas I think you should work on. Good luck!

by bass, do you mean the notes, or the instrument?