Actually I’m more of an electro/house/techno type of person but this is what I made and actually the first thing which is quite OK. I think it’s still a bit boring and don’t really know what to do about it… Would love to have some feedback 
Acid Nebula by Aniek
Hi, I like the tune. IMO what it lacks is a bit of focus on the melody. I would try and remove the autopan and make it a bit simpler in some of the parts, like when the kickdrum starts. I think that could “lift” the song a bit, but I think you can go somewhere with this.
I would also work a little bit on the drum sounds, just play with the decay and release to make it a little more “snappy.”