hi
our second track we like to hear some comment
Aroused- Chi Mai by Aroused Records
really like the start, nice and driving.
it starts to go wrong with the pulsing string… it slows everything down too much.
When the main stabs come in they are too loud and everything sounds really badly squashed and over compressed… dial down all your compression and mastering.
The chord progression is really good except for one of the chords seems weird and fighting with either the strings and bass. have a look at it see if you can see whats causing it… few wrong notes somewhere think its 6th bar of the progression.
The “real” strings in the break and from then on sound a bit cheap and not very tidy.
Its maybe just the sound is over powering… try getting rid of some of the low mid 150-400. and compress it more with a fairly slow compressor… will make the notes more even.
Its also quite long… id aim for 6:30-7 max have to be cruel to be kind… defo half the start and get rid of the first half of the break.
Theres defo something there! could be a belter if you get it right!
thanks phil, we will work on it a little bit more to get it right. Can we come back to you after we done it?
grtz. Andrew & Gianni