Hi guys!
Last 2 days I took a take on the Bouncy Tech House tutorial. It’s awesome 
Was the really first time for me, recording my own vocals and give the track a “message”. Hope someone can understand the lyrics 
After all I’m really happy with the sound of the song. Maybe I should fix some little points of the arrangement.
Enough said. Here’s the song (a short edit) for you. Feedback is welcomed
So, changed the file to the extended mix
Very nice, I really enjoyed that!
Got a new follower!
Really enjoyed that. Love some of the sounds in there, sounds devious and vocals are just creepy!
Yeah very catchy with the percussion and I LOVE the vocal. I think the plinky part is a touch too loud though as it seems to overpower the rest of the sounds goin on and they kind of get forgotten. I’m not sure if that’s the feel you were goin for?
Also I’d say it all gets a bit lost towards the end with everything goin on (about 3:50 I think) with the vocal and lead etc…
This is purely my opinion though Bill and I might be totally wrong about it. I’ve only been producing for just over a year, but that’s how it comes across on my speakers.
Overall though I really like it! 
Thanks to both of you
Happy to get some positive feedback.
@enigma: yes, I think you’re right - the arrangement and modulation of vocals/lead at the end isn’t that good at the moment. think I’ll fix that soon. Thanks !
Yep – that was my feedback, too. Things get a little wonky in the latter section in terms of vocal arrangement.
But otherwise the track has a really solid groove to it. It’s got that “funk.” Kind of reminds me of some of Brodinski’s more recent stuff. Not quite as aggressive as his tracks, but still punch, head-bobbing stuff for sure.
SOLID track.
Thanks, man
For your interest: I did a little animation clip for a short edit version of Liza. You can watch it on YouTube. Is kind of a story-telling thing there. But I really liked how easy it was to create a little music video
Video is oddly captivating.