BPD (Clip/Preview)

Hey guys this is a preview of a track I’ve been working on, watched the Dirty Dutch tut to see how the track is put together, currently working on the breakdown but so far I have the chorus done.br
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Here is a preview of the buildup and the drop.br
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[soundcloud]https://soundcloud.com/sebt1890/b-p-d-clip-preview[/soundcloud]

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Here ya go - embedded ;)br
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Nice sound, hard to comment as I don’t want to go on about certain aspects as its a WIP. The one thing I would mention is I’m not a fan of the toms, I would like to hear them with a bit of the lows cut out and with some resonance. Reason for that is I just think they sit a bit heavier than the rest of the sounds and this should make them a little bit more playful :)br
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Looking forward to hearing the finished track though!br
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Stu

Critique all you want to be honest, anything is helpful, the breakdown and buildup is still being heavily worked on, but the drop and chorus is going to pretty much stay the same for the most part.br
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About the toms, I do feel like they have too much low end, I’ll definitely brighten them up with a filter and eq. Thanks!