if so please let me know!!!
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hey man. I have been listening to your music since you signed up to SA.
i go by the opinion with my music that it can ALWAYS sound bettter.
hence the idea of remixes.
I am going to give you my drunk & honest opinion.
Your song is good. It is an cool melody and you have a lot of nice sounds going on.
I love a good instrumental track as much as the next person, but you need some extra riffs layering over top over your melody. Like think about every riff/melody that you have in your chorus, breakdown, etc… and think about how you could keep another riff going in time with a different instrument playing in the same key but with a different groove. if that makes any sense. but then you could also do automation and extra effects on top of the new riffs. i swear if you can get this, that it will fatten up your sound completely. your bass was good. good work on the low-end. I listened to it with my monitors all the way up.
THink of it as like a solo over top of your melody for your track.
I know this isnt exactly trance… but its close and I love this track…
Listen to the main melody of your song. and then over top think about this track.
mint feedback U.V 
thanks alot… got all day tommorrow to fatten it up
ohh and i do know what you mean by a new riff on top of that one within the same key, but different melody
nice one!!
I think we should all post our tracks and take time to listen to each others track(when we can of course) and add a comment or two on them.
You never know Phil might come in and give you his opinion. That’s when you would have a real PRO giving you his opinion on your track.
I think we have to start doing it first though.
i’m happy to do so!!