Can this sound better?

if so please let me know!!!



Soundcloud snip by ‘GEKA’_George_Kadar

hey man. I have been listening to your music since you signed up to SA.



i go by the opinion with my music that it can ALWAYS sound bettter.



hence the idea of remixes.



I am going to give you my drunk & honest opinion.



Your song is good. It is an cool melody and you have a lot of nice sounds going on.



I love a good instrumental track as much as the next person, but you need some extra riffs layering over top over your melody. Like think about every riff/melody that you have in your chorus, breakdown, etc… and think about how you could keep another riff going in time with a different instrument playing in the same key but with a different groove. if that makes any sense. but then you could also do automation and extra effects on top of the new riffs. i swear if you can get this, that it will fatten up your sound completely. your bass was good. good work on the low-end. I listened to it with my monitors all the way up.



THink of it as like a solo over top of your melody for your track.



I know this isnt exactly trance… but its close and I love this track…



Listen to the main melody of your song. and then over top think about this track.



mint feedback U.V :smiley:

thanks alot… got all day tommorrow to fatten it up

ohh and i do know what you mean by a new riff on top of that one within the same key, but different melody

nice one!!

I think we should all post our tracks and take time to listen to each others track(when we can of course) and add a comment or two on them.



You never know Phil might come in and give you his opinion. That’s when you would have a real PRO giving you his opinion on your track.



I think we have to start doing it first though.

i’m happy to do so!!