Can this track be fixed or should i just give up and start again? trance style track

Music Production Track Feedback
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Hey guys can anyone help me fix this messed up track? or is it best to just scrap it and start again?br
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well, the genre is not my cup of tea, but if you think the mix is messed up check this out:br

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definetly helped me out on my last production.br
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the problem in my eyes that the track doesnt have a clear structure.br
It also lacks a catchy melody which gives the some sort of recognition value.br
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for a fast paced smartphone game it would be perfect tough :slight_smile: