Can u guys please spare sometime take a listen and please let me know what you guys really think about it?

here is the link br
http://play.beatport.com/contests/flosstradamus-mosh-pit-feat-casino/53b3acfe753a0d1a88ab0418br
please be kind enough to take a listen and let me know what you guys really think about it,thank you so much :slight_smile: :stuck_out_tongue:

I’m not in a great position to comment on this type of tune cause to me most EDM stuff sounds pretty similar (showing my age)br
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However trying to be constructive, the main lead just seems to have way too many note strikes, it’s sound a bit out of control and just over shadows everything else that’s going on in the track. Not sure what the original is like but I can barely listen to anything else cause the lead is just rattling along like, dare I say it, a broken alarm. If I were you I would try a different pattern, with a kinder rhythm to it. br
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