I’d like some feedback on a remix i’m doing for a comp i’m entering.
thanks in advance !!
FdV wdw remix test-1 by wouterdewitte
that bad huh ?? :Whistling:
Yes 
Only kidding - everything sounds good - just sounded a bit repetitive I think you need to add something different half way through
[quote]slender (13/04/2011)[hr]Yes
Only kidding - everything sounds good - just sounded a bit repetitive I think you need to add something different half way through[/quote]
thanks mate i’ll have a look what i can come up with, i need to shorten it too i believe
[quote]wouterdewitte (13/04/2011)[hr][quote]slender (13/04/2011)[hr]Yes
Only kidding - everything sounds good - just sounded a bit repetitive I think you need to add something different half way through[/quote]
thanks mate i’ll have a look what i can come up with, i need to shorten it too i believe[/quote]
Have you not seen the length of my tracks 
The dynamics and structure are good mate, only thing I would suggest is to take a look at the “nested structures” tutorial in the drums, breaks and builds course. I think you could add some dissonance by unquantizing and humanizing the drum hits - so its not so loopy. 
[quote]varsa (16/04/2011)[hr]The dynamics and structure are good mate, only thing I would suggest is to take a look at the “nested structures” tutorial in the drums, breaks and builds course. I think you could add some dissonance by unquantizing and humanizing the drum hits - so its not so loopy. :)[/quote]
thanks for the workable feedback Varsa. I’ll check it out.
It sounds good, but I think it needs more variation.
[quote]BananaJo (17/04/2011)[hr]It sounds good, but I think it needs more variation.[/quote]
thanks for the comment!! I’ll work on it
Too long indeed. Especially for such a repetitive track. You really need to bring in some variation. Cause the main part of your track is that bassline which consists out of just 2 notes. Add another synth. Something with more high.
Otherwise add some other sounds like you did on 4:00.
The drums part is fine. Sounds good and balanced, but rather industry-like style. Everything is right on the spot. You might consider adding some swing.
Between 3:00 - 5:30 you could add some variation in the drum part by filtering out some low from the kick or removing the kick entirely for 4 beats or something. It’s just too big a chunck of the same there.
Another thing you could try is removing more low from the whitenoise you use. There’s too much mid in my opinion.
great feedback daniaan… thanks a lot!!
I’ll work with it this week!!
If you have a midi controller you could try to play with the song around live. It helps me a lot to find new ways to use all the different elements I have.
Made a few changes, although no finished yet i thought i’d share to perhaps get more feedback…
FdV- wouterdewitte remix v2 by wouterdewitte
made some last minute changes and tweaks… here is my entry for the competition… feedback welcome off course…
sounded good whilst pist, what else can i say
haha cool mate…
thanks!