Can use some feedback

I’d like some feedback on a remix i’m doing for a comp i’m entering.

thanks in advance !!



FdV wdw remix test-1 by wouterdewitte

that bad huh ?? :Whistling:

Yes :stuck_out_tongue:



Only kidding - everything sounds good - just sounded a bit repetitive I think you need to add something different half way through

[quote]slender (13/04/2011)[hr]Yes :stuck_out_tongue:



Only kidding - everything sounds good - just sounded a bit repetitive I think you need to add something different half way through[/quote]



thanks mate i’ll have a look what i can come up with, i need to shorten it too i believe

[quote]wouterdewitte (13/04/2011)[hr][quote]slender (13/04/2011)[hr]Yes :stuck_out_tongue:



Only kidding - everything sounds good - just sounded a bit repetitive I think you need to add something different half way through[/quote]



thanks mate i’ll have a look what i can come up with, i need to shorten it too i believe[/quote]



Have you not seen the length of my tracks :wink:

The dynamics and structure are good mate, only thing I would suggest is to take a look at the “nested structures” tutorial in the drums, breaks and builds course. I think you could add some dissonance by unquantizing and humanizing the drum hits - so its not so loopy. :slight_smile:

[quote]varsa (16/04/2011)[hr]The dynamics and structure are good mate, only thing I would suggest is to take a look at the “nested structures” tutorial in the drums, breaks and builds course. I think you could add some dissonance by unquantizing and humanizing the drum hits - so its not so loopy. :)[/quote]



thanks for the workable feedback Varsa. I’ll check it out.

It sounds good, but I think it needs more variation.

[quote]BananaJo (17/04/2011)[hr]It sounds good, but I think it needs more variation.[/quote]



thanks for the comment!! I’ll work on it :slight_smile:

Too long indeed. Especially for such a repetitive track. You really need to bring in some variation. Cause the main part of your track is that bassline which consists out of just 2 notes. Add another synth. Something with more high.

Otherwise add some other sounds like you did on 4:00.



The drums part is fine. Sounds good and balanced, but rather industry-like style. Everything is right on the spot. You might consider adding some swing.



Between 3:00 - 5:30 you could add some variation in the drum part by filtering out some low from the kick or removing the kick entirely for 4 beats or something. It’s just too big a chunck of the same there.



Another thing you could try is removing more low from the whitenoise you use. There’s too much mid in my opinion.

great feedback daniaan… thanks a lot!!



I’ll work with it this week!!

If you have a midi controller you could try to play with the song around live. It helps me a lot to find new ways to use all the different elements I have.

Made a few changes, although no finished yet i thought i’d share to perhaps get more feedback…



FdV- wouterdewitte remix v2 by wouterdewitte

new version…

FdV - wdw remix v3 by wouterdewitte



tell me what you think…

made some last minute changes and tweaks… here is my entry for the competition… feedback welcome off course…



sounded good whilst pist, what else can i say :stuck_out_tongue:

haha cool mate…

thanks!