Criticism needed,

hi, Ive seen a few tutorials here and some on Youtube. Ive only been doing this since February so im pretty much a newbie. But i made this from what ive learned SoundCloud - Hear the world’s sounds

Its not ready nor is it mastered. But i just wanna here whats what im missing in this

if the drums are wrong or if its compressed to much, Just give me some tips and criticism so i can improve and make it a lot better. And if something is actually good its okey to bring that up to:)

My fav part is the last 20 sec at the end!



[url]http://soundcloud.com/user5686403/schitzo-unfinished[/url]

There’s definetely some nice elements in it, but you really need to sort some things out.

There’s hardly any low end in the track. Kick is not strong to carry the track.

Those trancy stabs you have are also a bit thin. Compress them a bit. Maybe layer them with another sound that holds a bit more low and gel the two together with some compression.

I would suggest you try copying a track you really like to give you some structure to work with… will give you a better understanding of how things go together.



there is defo a lack of bass in your track… what speakers are you using?

TY guys for taking your time and listening to it and giving it some thoughts.

Im really gonna try to improve the things uve listened here.



IM using M-audio BX5 speakers and

audio technica ath-m50 Headphones.