Daniel du Noy - Could You Feel Some?

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This is the full arrangement. Won’t stay up for long, but I do love to hear your opinion on this one.



Thanks!Daniel du Noy - Could You Feel Some?
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Intro caught my attention the most, really liked it. Really enjoyed the track throughout, very nice structure to it.

Cant really say anything negative about it.

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Hey Daniel



It’s a great sounding track. The synths and bass work really well together.



There’s a couple of things you might want to consider though - (1) the perc seems to me to be kick, clap, hats/shakers*. If there’s something else in there I’m not sure I can hear it and I think that the track would benefit from something else. I know there’s that woody hit but it feels more synth-y than perc-y; (2) the break starts really really really well, with the hat flam and added clap, liked that A LOT but then it feels like it goes on for too long as a build as, again, this might be tied to the perc, not a lot changes. There’s loads of build but not much variation, if that makes sense for a two minute break.



*On a second I just heard a slight added knock after the break. Maybe this needs boosting?

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I second the intro, really like it. Shakers and instruments sound great when the kick drops in. 1:04, that deep mono bass really makes this track bang! I really like the break, and how quiet it gets at the break. Its like starting at the bottom of a roller coaster. The drop is great! I can really see why you guys emphasize my track breakdowns to be a bit quiter on the bass side, it makes the drop impact wayyy more powerful. I really like the vocals on this one too, has a bit of a disco groooove. After 5:40, it does get a tad bland. Maybe add more variations? But then again, I do have a short attention span :stuck_out_tongue: Anyways, good work man!

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Thanks for the feedback already. Will have another listen this weekend :slight_smile:



Btw, this is what I have right now

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My thoughts:



-Would prefer the kick to come in 8 bars earlier at the start of the track


  • Think would be better if the extra part that comes in at the start of the main breakdown, comes in during the first mini-break - to add some variety


  • Thought the breakdown was too long by about 16 bars for this kind of track


  • Vocal was too low when it comes in during the breakdown


  • Ultimately i don’t think you currently have enough parts to keep a track going for the 7.10 min duration - so think you need to add more parts to flesh things out for this long.



    What you have already is very nice though, but it needs quite a few more parts added, otherwise it just gets boring and too repetitive.



    Hope that helps, David.