Deep house track

My first track that im happy with… please comment, criticise and give pointers.



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Thankyou!:w00t:

I can see why you are happy with it, I I really like it.

The sound that comes in at 2.20ish in particular really works for me.

I have only listened to it on headphones but the mix sounded great.

If I was going to look to offer an area to improve it, I might try and have the first break become a little more sparse before coming back in - but I could be wrong on that.

thanks mate, not sure how it sounds on a decent set of speakers though. Its not mastered, i did with pc monitors and sennheiser headphones, not ideal. Will look at the breakdown though. :slight_smile: