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[url]https://soundcloud.com/deep-pleasure/3-p-m[/url]
Hi mate, here’s my thoughts:br
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- I would stick a fairly low-frequency element in-between the kicks at the start of the track, to capture the swing and add a little more groovebr
br - Really like the chord stabsbr
br - The blippy stab that comes in later is a bit weak - think you need a stronger, bigger sound with more impact and characterbr
br - I would use a percussion loop or two during the break, as more groove is needed and more interestbr
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br - I would add in an extra melody just after the break, as the first 8/16 bars of the drop are a little sparsebr
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Overall it’s a good sounding track, but i think it needs a few more elements to fill it out and add more interest and drive.br
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Really well mixed so far though, what you do have is very good.
Thx for answer 
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Would you like to remix? 
Yeah sure. Send me the parts and what i will do, is as well as doing a quick remix, i will also listen to each of the parts in isloation and give you some more feedback on what you can do to improve your tracks going forward./PPWhat’s the best way for you to send the parts to me? Do you have dropbox thing or something?
Yes I have drobbox… Projekt Logic pro 9. br
where can I send?
Here, try this service from one of the other members on here by following this link:br
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http://forums.sonicacademy.com/Topic96453-29-1.aspxbr
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Apparently it’s alot more storage than Dropbox, and files upload quicker.br
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Let me know when you’ve done it. Not quite sure how we transfer files from one to the other though, have you done this kind of thing before?br
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Let me know if you know what is the best way of doing it?br
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I have set up an account for myself on Copy. Can you just copy and paste the files directly into my account storage space?