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Hey mate, travelling at the mo so listened via iPad and bud phones. Mix sounds good and arrangement moves along well. Good groove. Personally not keen at all on the vocal stab/snip. Didn’t feel that it fitted 100% with the vibe of the track plus, even though its modulated, didn’t seem to go anywhere. br
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-mix sounds tight and clean. Definitely has a nice upbeat groove and vibe. I 2nd a different vocal snippet could be used, I’m feeling something along the lines of a sexy female.
Very clean tight tech house track. Like it. Can’t really point out any things you could improve except for the vocal stab. Might insert another one in the 2nd break.
hate tech house with a passion usually, but this is very smooth, actually love it well done
Now that’s some groovy stuff allright!nbsp; I love the rythm! Also the mix sounds good except for two thoughts I would like to add to the discussion:/PP- I have to agree, although not entirely,nbsp;with the comments above about the vocal.nbsp; I think it’s just too upfront in the mix.nbsp; Lower the gain a bit, maybe try to put a short reverb on it (tune it fairly “wet”) tonbsp;make it sound as if it’s coming from somewhere else in the room.nbsp; Also go easy on “stabbin” it all around behind the break.nbsp; Two times in every barnbsp;seems a bit much.nbsp;In the “question/answer”-story it’s like a question without the answer, but over and over again.nbsp; Maybe try and drop only one stab in each bar and add another short vocal or organ stab to counter that./PP- Secondly, 2 thoughts about that bassline. First: I feel like it could us some sub.nbsp; Leave this bassline in place but just put one next to it that is an octave lower, cutoff everything above the lower mids, and voila.nbsp; Mixdown at your own taste ofcourse.nbsp; And then another thought isnbsp;to get some more groove in that bassline.nbsp; Now it’s just every 2nd 1/8 "down-up-down-up-…"nbsp; It doesn’t really stand out in grooviness compared to that great rythm section.nbsp; To start off not to drastically though, I wouldnbsp;suggest tonbsp;split up every second before mentioned “down” note in two 1/8, maybe you’ll have to play around with attack and decay times, and probably a little sidechain compression from the kick.nbsp; But I think it’ll get the heads noddin’ :D/PPAnyway, I really like it, but as Christopher Walken once said “more cowbell!” 