Deep with a touch of progressive

afternoon all . . .



I first posted a clip of this up a month or so ago, but have now added a lot more to the mix and the arrangement. What do you think ?



Weak by bobbylickrish



The vocal will be added in the next couple of weeks, but any suggestions before I get to that stage ?



Thanks

Very nice smooth chill vibe. Usually not my type of track, but I really likes the trancy feel(not trance music, but trancy). Mixing sounds real good too. Good job.

I like it, very Uber cool!!

Very nice track mate.  Reminds me of early progressive trance stuff.  I’m loving the pads.

One suggestion I would make is in relation to the lead sound that comes in at 0.16 and plays throughout most of the track.  I felt it becoming slightly annoying after a while. 

To me it feels very very slightly behind the rest of the track.  It gives the track a very lazy feel.  Maybe this is what you were going for?  But for the dancefloor I would trying nudging this lead forward.

Also, maybe reverb it back a bit into the mix or mix the volume of it a bit lower so its not at the very forefront, especially when the mix is full with other elements after the break.

Overall, its a great track and there is nothing ‘wrong’ with the mix at all, my suggestions are purely artistic 'cos you asked for suggestions!  

Good shout about the repetative lead. I have mucked around with a low pass filter and some automation and it’s sounding much better now. More movement and change.



Thanks for your comments peeps. Studio time is booked for 10th december to record the vox . . . Will most up again with vocal!



B

cool track, i would play this

deep as fook…

very xpanderish…

not fussed on the kick at the start sounds toppy and interfearing with a few bits.

Molidic wise its spot on mate well done…

Hi Luke,



thanks for the comments mate - Glad you are liking it.



Have messed around with arrangement slightly to fit vocal that we are due to record this Thursday.



Cheers again



B