Hi all,br
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I’ve just placed my first dance track on Youtube and would love some feedback…br
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r3KX6IhyqQUbr
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I’ve been making tunes for just under 12 months, and this is the first dance track. Sitting at 135bpm, it’s a little quicker that most of my stuff.br
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More than happy to receive to constructive criticism. It’s not intended for release, I just wanted to get it out there. br
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Cheers.
Nice melody but you really need to look at more varitation, fx and layers. To me it just sounded like one synth and a kick drum. Maybe watch the mainroom house tutorial and the prog house. Helped me alot :)br
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Stu
i agree with xpa on the variation…br
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also i couldnt hear a bassline in the track, maybe im crazy but other than the kick the low end seems to be nonexistent
Thanks both…br
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I’m not sure if it’s just the style that I use, but there are two synths layered together. And there is a bass, it’s sidechained to the kick.br
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If I mute one of the synths, the sound changes completely. Same with the bass. If I mute it, it’s obviously missing.br
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I think the approach that I take is that the bass is not an overly defining feature of my music, I use it to simply fill the bottom end.br
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Thanks again.
[quote]graytec (14/04/2013)[hr]Thanks both…br
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I’m not sure if it’s just the style that I use, but there are two synths layered together. And there is a bass, it’s sidechained to the kick.br
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If I mute one of the synths, the sound changes completely. Same with the bass. If I mute it, it’s obviously missing.br
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I think the approach that I take is that the bass is not an overly defining feature of my music, I use it to simply fill the bottom end.br
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Thanks again.[/quote]br
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Ok but this doesn’t change what I can hear?!?
Not at all… Nor was it intended to. I was simply outlining that what you did hear was a deliberate act on my part.br
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I do appreciate your feedback though.