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Sounds like you know what you are doing ma men!!! The Sound is great and perfectly round. The only thing what I could “complain” is that the pad-sound is allmost the whole track playing. Its a good pad, but if its for to long its takes after awhile the energy out of the track. So just turn it after awhile down, let the ears reset for a while and then bring it back. I like as well the begining when drums, perc and bass starts. Very groovy kicking !! The melodys of the synths very nice! What synths (vst or hardware) you are using?br
Good job!!
Hi there DJ Noor!PI can’t listen to the track right now as at work (i’ll try and listen when i get home and give you feedback), but what i would say now is embed the soundcloud link into the page my friend, rather than provide a link!/PPAnything that makes it quicker and easier for people to listen to your track will help to get you more feedback./PPCan you take a listen to my tracks belownbsp;and let me know what you think:/PPlt;iframe width=“100%” height=“166” scrolling=“no” frameborder=“no” src="A href='http://w.soundcloud.com/player/?url=http%3A%2F%2Fapi.soundcloud.com%2Ftracks%2F73076970amp;show_artwork=true"/iframe’http://w.soundcloud.com/player/?url=http%3A%2F%2Fapi.soundcloud.com%2Ftracks%2F73076970amp;show_artwork=true"gt;lt;/iframe/Agt;/PPlt;iframe width=“100%” height=“166” scrolling=“no” frameborder=“no” src="A href='http://w.soundcloud.com/player/?url=http%3A%2F%2Fapi.soundcloud.com%2Ftracks%2F69059718amp;show_artwork=true"/iframe’http://w.soundcloud.com/player/?url=http%3A%2F%2Fapi.soundcloud.com%2Ftracks%2F69059718amp;show_artwork=true"gt;lt;/iframe/Agt;/PPThen i will listen to yours when i get home today and provide feedback./PPCheers mate, David.
Ironically, the Soundcloud embed links don’t seem to be working properly at the moment as you can see!/PPBut you can still click on the link and then just press the play button to listen - so much better than having to copy and paste a link into your browser etc.
:45, just beautiful…beautiful :Dbr
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Percussions and hats sound great! br
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1:18, really nice pluck sounds, but I think the melody is kinda meh. Doesn’t create any emotion or excitement. br
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Overall it sounds really good, but change the melody up.
I like it. It’s good as it is, I wouldn’t add or remove anything.
Thank you all for the comments. I am still working on the track so it is still missing any transitional elements to really make it flow correctly. I really appreciate the time you took to have a listen. br
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as for embedding, here goes a try I guess. :Pbr
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Cheers to you all,br
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Noor Mitribr
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Yes the embedding worked!/PPBut you didn’t take the time to comment on my track after i took the time to comment on yours?/PPCan you have a quick listen and let me know what you think - after all, i took the time to listen to yours and leave you some comments!/PPThanks, David.
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I had a listen to your track m8. The style is not my style so I won’t comment on melody feel etc and will simply give you some technical feedback. I think the overall structure of the track is great. But I think you could do better mixing the track, it sounds a little too much in the high frequencies and lower but empty in the middle try connecting the middle to high and low frequencies instead of filtering it completely. Also, Try using compression on the drums and percussion + hats…etc There is a little emptiness there and I think it could sound tighter. br
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I think at the end of the track things get a little busy. Another point is I suggest side chaining certain sounds to each other. This allows the different layers to be heard and each sound to be distinct. br
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I hope this helps, The work is great though m8. Congrats!!br
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Noor
Thanks mate!