Hey Phil, this is my first track I’ve made following the DnD 2012 in Ableton tutorial. I’ve been listening to it on different soundsystems for about two weeks and have written down some notes so I definitely know that the mix is off but I’d also like a second opinion before I go to make the final changes. Thanks!br
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Sound very good on my systembr
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Only a few things stuck out:br
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the snare sounds a bit too much in the background and could have a bit more weight to it. maybe just ease off the reverb a touch.br
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the top bass is a bit dry and not as big as it could be… id maybe try widening it and maybe add some saturation Distortion… maybe as a paralell insert so you keep some of the original intact.br
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Other than that sounded good to me.