Started this when I got home from uni today and pretty much have it finished aside from anything that may pop out at me after a night's sleep.
Let me know what I need to work on! I'm still an amateur and any criticisms will be appreciated!
It is such a good song! you should really spend time on this one!
heres one thing i noticed you could do
your kick could have more low end since its not playing at the same time as your bass anyway, so its totally cool to add those low frequencies on there.
also you could try to lower the volume on the high frequencies on your kick, the low and the high should be balanced, now its like way too much high compared to the low.
in my opinion that is!
other than that good job in only 1 day
[quote]wild_donkeyJR (29/03/2012)[hr]It is such a good song! you should really spend time on this one!
heres one thing i noticed you could do
your kick could have more low end since its not playing at the same time as your bass anyway, so its totally cool to add those low frequencies on there.
also you could try to lower the volume on the high frequencies on your kick, the low and the high should be balanced, now its like way too much high compared to the low.
in my opinion that is!
other than that good job in only 1 day
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Thanks for the input! A few people have had the same thoughts as you on the kick and it not being full enough, so I’m definitely going to fix that! I tried to keep the kick tight, but it looks like that caused it to become a bit empty! I’ll also balance the high and low of it (something I’ve never done before because I never even thought to do it lol).
Again, thanks for the input!
I dont think you need me to tell you how good this track f’n is, 205 replies in 400 views saying its good is all you need.
Fantastic work!
This is a great track. I love the stabs it sounds familiar but still fresh.
Nicely done. And pretty impressive to finish a track in one day. Never have succeeded in that.
And have to agree a little on the kick, but that’s just minor.