Hey guys
I’ve uploaded a new track to Soundcloud. Been working on it all weekend and my ears are a bit tired! So, I’d really appreciate you having a listen and commenting as much as possible.
Thanks for the help. Secret linky below…
I’ve killed this link - please use the new one below that links to the updated file. Much happier with the new version.
Like the laid back min feel to it, I am not sure if you need to add any thing to it
BTW I really like your LS is M()R - excellent techno stuff 
Posted a comment on your song.
Yes, I was listening on headphones and checking to see if my volume was fully up, it was. So yeah, your song is a bit quiet. Fix that and it’s a really decent track.
Peace
Thanks guys. Really do appreciate the listen.
Made a few tweaks - cut the bass out from the start and brought it in a few bars later, tweaked a few perc points, and yep boosted volumes. Will spit it out and re-post asap.
Anyone else feel free to add comments on current version please. Ta v much guys!
Glad you like it. I tend to like my tracks when I first start to make them then begin to dislike them when I’m done. I still think I need to find more of a hook but then that’s the real skill I guess.
[quote]jonsloan (08/08/2010)[hr]Thanks guys. Really do appreciate the listen.
Made a few tweaks - cut the bass out from the start and brought it in a few bars later, tweaked a few perc points, and yep boosted volumes. Will spit it out and re-post asap.
Anyone else feel free to add comments on current version please. Ta v much guys!
Glad you like it. I tend to like my tracks when I first start to make them then begin to dislike them when I’m done. I still think I need to find more of a hook but then that’s the real skill I guess.
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Couldn’t agree more haha. It just turns to **** and that awesome idea that blew you away to begin with has totally vanished, so you’re left struggling to piece it all back together into the way it was but never truly get there.
[quote]jonsloan (08/08/2010)[hr]
I tend to like my tracks when I first start to make them then begin to dislike them when I’m done.
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Haha welcome to my world
Hey guys,
I amended the arrangement of the intro and few parts later on. Tweaked the mix levels and squashed the sub a little. Plus, added a mastering rack to the master track.
New secret link below:
[url]http://soundcloud.com/block-punch/false-optimism-1/s-Q4KOw[/url]
If you get a chance, please let me know what you think. Thanks for the comments so far!
I’ve killed the first link and left only the link to the amended version live.
This new version has a better intro and heavily tweaked mix/EQ levels to help clarity. Any more comments much appreciated!
I’ve re-EQ’ed this, sorted some mix levels, compressed others, etc. Right gonna send it to some labels and see what happens.
[quote]slender (08/08/2010)[hr][quote]jonsloan (08/08/2010)[hr]
I tend to like my tracks when I first start to make them then begin to dislike them when I’m done.
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Haha welcome to my world :D[/quote]
haha snap!
Cool track this mate, good luck with the labels!