Feedback! Chris Stuart - Dynamics (Original Mix)

hey guys! just looking for some additional feedback for the track! I’ve made a few Exciting changes and think it is definitely getting there! any suggestions/comments would be much appreciated!

here it is!

http://soundcloud.com/chrisink/chris-stuart-dynamics-original

You got some good sounds going there nice delays and sweeps but to me its to major like im more of a dark minor guy :smiley: you could also an an intro and a break down which seems to be the only thing missing