Feedback Exchange! C'mon musicians! Post your track and let's get better!

Hi there! I think it is important for an artist to receive lots of feedbacks form other musicians in order to improve his capabilities. So, I’ll start! I’d like just to receive your honest feedback about this track. If you like the track you can vote for it, but remember, I prefer a sincere feedback than a vote I don’t deserve. br
Short link: http://goo.gl/Nq2T1mbr
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Let’s exchange some useful feedbacks! :slight_smile:

I would comment but personally i’m not a big fan of these remix contests, i think it’s hard to inject any real uniqueness or character into the track if you use most of the original parts?br
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This really isn’t my style as well, so not much point commenting much.br
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I did have a quick listen though, and the overall sound of the track sounds pretty good.br
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How do people win these Beatport contests anyway? Is it based purely on the numner of votes you receive?

To be honest the mix is a little weak. The bass needs some attention. Overall it lacks any real power.br
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I would recommend when mixing checking tracks you like to see where they hit in teh frequencies.

Hey dud i like the idea of your track some of the parts are really good but it is missing something. Try making more energetic build ups. Mix it down better.br
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http://play.beatport.com/contests/3lau-paris-simo-escape-feat-bright-lights/5225e9d3b8ed743fee0ef3b8br
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Here is a remix i made guys tell me what you think!!