Hi there @returnnull
Seriously 6 months producing only ?
Well then it's really good work done for such a short time, congrats.
Apart from the choice of sounds and the tonal register of the track that I find a bit too much in the highs and missing some lo end & deeper bass feel, and this is purely subjective to my liking BTW, nothing to do with doing it wrong you did a good job both in track arrangement & progression as well as mixing/mastering.
Is this a self mastered track or did you send it to someone or used an online mastering service like Landr ?
Anyway, good work, keep it on
Included below is a DR Offline Meter stat report, showing Dynamic range, RMS & Peaks value after download from Soundcloud. You're reaching commercial track DR & RMS levels without clipping too much, glad you didn't push this one further, loud doesn't mean good. It's a good habit to leave - 1 dB of headroom ( True Peak ) when uploading to Soundcloud because the peaks will increase once the file has been transcoded. Also a good choice to upload in FLAC format, best one when available, even if it takes more time & size.
avanti_master_v3.1.flac_dr.txt (735 Bytes)
Also passing the file true Mastering The Mix Expose, you're reaching good loudness levels as report by the LUFS values in the screenshot, good work again. If you're not familiar with Expose, there's a course here on Sonic Academy https://www.sonicacademy.com/courses/mastering-the-mix-expose-with-rory-webb
Hope this helps,