Feedback for my trance tune

Hey guys,



just finished a song, it is only my 2nd song, so I’m rather new and incompetent :smiley: Nevertheless, feel free to say what comes to your mind, any help appreciated:



If anyone wants to know: I used Ableton, Sylenth1 and Zebra for that song.



Edit: If anyone has an idea why this song lacks the energy (thats what I feel) it’d be great, cause I couldnt figure it out yet



Eigentlich müsste ich ja lernen by Chris Racha

please embed the player mate

i quite like this, doesnt quite have the cheese on top sound most trance heads seem to want to emulate

I like the sound used for the nice warm bass - what did you use for that?

I’m not sure which bass you mean exactly, so here are all bass and mid-bass sounds I used:

Simple offbeat (sub)bass through the whole song: Ableton’s Operator

Bassline starting at 0:58 is Operator as well

Pretty quiet bassline comes in with the stabs at 1:12 or so: Ableton’s Analog

And - ok its not really a bass, but maybe you mean this thing - the sound starting at 0:28 is a Sylenth1

Here is some food for thought, It kinda of reminds me of some old school Trance like around the late ninetys

Great arrangement! Keeps the interest up! … I would crank up the bass and add a bit more beef to the kick … that might help to inject more energy into the track … hope that helps :smiley: