Hi guys. My name is Adrian and I’d like to say hallo to everyone at first.br
I have started making tunes around 3 years ago I enjoy electro , progressive and bit of dubstep as well.br
I 'd like to hear your opinion of my newest track called Ephemera this gonna be my first which i actually gonna send to some labels, so I will be grateful if you can tell me is it any way to improve it or is it not so good and I should work harder. Thanks in advance for your time.br
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https://soundcloud.com/planefektik/ephemera
There is really some nice interesting things in there. But for my taste its not good arranged. So they loose their effect. As well the mixdown is for my taste not good. You can do ducking, but this is so extreamly ducked and for long time, so you loose there as well lots of atmosphere. The drums groove get complitly destroyed from that. Its a pitty becouse ther is really some cool stuff in there.
There is some really good ideas here but the arrangement is a little bit crazy for me,br
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Its almost like you took every technique you learned in the last few months and mashed them together in the first 2 minuets of the track.br
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I would highly recommend taking a track with similar sounds as your track and using it as a ghost track and copy the arrangement.br
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All the same i did like allot of the sounds and think just some arrangement tweaks could make a big difference.
It could be that I just have no idea what genre this is supposed to be and therefore have no taste for it, but what I’m hearing is extremely unmusical, weird and annoying. Could just be that I prefer a different style, though.