Feedback on a track :D

Hi folks, I was wondering if I could get some feedback on this track I produced recently. I want it to be perfect so I’m more than willing to go back to the drawing board if necessary. Please be extra critical :). Thanks! Post one of your tracks here too and I’d be more than happy to provide feedback for it as well.br
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https://soundcloud.com/joshmasimore/proggressive-trance-feedback-1br
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