Here is a link to a track im working on. still quite a bit to do break needs a fair bit of work and the levels are off
Some cool ides think it needs a little more omph and it seemed a tad quiet - but all that can be fixed - nice work and left comment at the usual place 
Nice heavy feel to it. Suppose the hats @1.30 could do with a more defined start.
The start sounds too much in the same register as the reverse thing. Maybe the low’s could be taken out gradually leading up to it, rather than the kick being taken out? And maybe a “honk” or a “Boink” (LOL) or an actual Noise, rather than whats there. I’m sure you know what I mean.
Love it… Love the bassline - and the way the track opens up as it goes.
Thats deadly mate - Gonna be annoying ya about some of those sounds! LOL
[quote]ICN (22/03/2011)[hr]Nice heavy feel to it. Suppose the hats @1.30 could do with a more defined start.
The start sounds too much in the same register as the reverse thing. Maybe the low’s could be taken out gradually leading up to it, rather than the kick being taken out? And maybe a “honk” or a “Boink”(LOL) or an actual Noise, rather than whats there. I’m sure you know what I mean.
Love it… Love the bassline - and the way the track opens up as it goes.
Thats deadly mate - Gonna be annoying ya about some of those sounds! LOL[/quote]
thanks for the comments lads.
i know what you mean, i was thinking about filtering the lows out a bit and then gradually bringing them back in