Feedback on this track needed

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Hi this is my third track that ive made so any advice is good.

Take a listend and hope you enjoy it!:wink:

Not really my taste in music but I’d say it was well produced!

Definitely some potential… here are a few things i noticed.


  1. Clap on the reverb is too roomy - maybe try using some of the clap verbs from the original trance course.


  2. The Drums have no real drive to them… the kick seems mixed to too much in the background.


  3. The stabs don’t have a particularly pleasing rhythm to them - try some thing more repetitive to give it a more solid sound.


  4. Theres no real atmosphere in the drop - add some crashes sweep fx and atmos layers to create something more interesting.


  5. Use Transitions between frequencies to add impact when stuff kicks back in… i.e in the break hipass filter some stuff so there is very little bass then when it kicks in bring the bass back.



    just some stuff from a first listen.



    would be happy to hear your next mixdown.

Yeeeoow, love that feedback Phil. I do really need to work on my drums. What u reckon i can do with the drums to add more drive? more hat patterns or just more percussion?

Yeah the drop sounds pretty dull when u put it like that, was going for a more relaxed trance track. but not dull. So i think i put all the focus in the break and forgot about the impact of the drop. So really need to sort that out. Cheer for the feedback :slight_smile: