Feedback please!

like i said, im new to making music, especially…electro?..im not very good with genres…well anyways, here is one Ive made…feedback is appreciated and any tips you may have! i know i need a lot of work…i just wanna hear what ppl have to say :slight_smile: lol



[url]http://soundcloud.com/c-s-9/untitled-2[/url]


i would pronounce the kick more (also balance the volumen between the snare/clap and the kick), and maybe i would try to give a high-pass filter to your synth sounds for cleaner sounding.

Personally felt some of the sounds felt a bit out of place. Mainly the funkier mid bass thingy past the first breakdown, didnt mesh too well with the other sounds.

Maybe thats just me though. Good track overall though!

And yeah, the kick needs to punch through stronger, give it a more bassy bottom too to make it thump.