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I would really like to send this out to see what comes of it, but was wondering if you could please give any thoughts about it all?br
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Stubr
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What you mean send it out to labels?br
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If that is what you mean, it really is nowhere near ready for that! br
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The arrangement needs alot of work.br
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The sound is fairly decent, but i think you need to use layering and FX etc to create the bigger sound that is typical of this kind of track.br
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Think you need to add some more sounds/parts to keep the track interesting as it progresses as well.
It’s a nice foundation, my friend. One suggestion that helps a lot is to listen to your track on as many different speakers as possible…car speakers, co liter speakers, friends cars, friends computers and stereos, headphones, earbuds, and even like iPhone speakers, etc etc. br
lots of times a song will sound fantastic on monitors but really dull on normal speakers, and you must realize that most people will be listening to your song on something other than monitors. br
So I’d say it needs some more filler and variations at parts. br
I’d suggest a good compressor like isotope’s ozone on the final master to help glue everything together, also. br
But it sounds like it will be a very unique song, so keep it up!br
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Cheersbr
Staf
Cheers guys 
Staf you’ve really helped there with that, I know exactly what I want to do with it now aha! br
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I personally don’t think the arrangement is that far out but there are some tweaks I want to make now. I managed to blag some time in a studio for mastering so need to get it done before then :Pbr
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Stu