what do you’s think? its hard for me to listen to something ive done and no if its any good or not?!br
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cheers :)br
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Track sound good… very nice groove and feel.br
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only thing that was putting me off was the vocal… it sounds good in places but gets a bit much after you hear the same thing a bunch of times.br
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you should try to find a local singer and try getting an original vocal on it.br
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Check reverb nation… do a search for you area and try to hook up with someone.br
Thanks for the advice phil it is greatly appreciated.br
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I understand what you mean with the vocal there isn’t really much variety in what she says.br
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Would you say if i was to scrap that vocal i should scrap the vocal fx’s i made for the transitions too?br
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This sounds really good!br
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I wouldn’t scrap the vocal FX - they really make the track.br
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Perhaps just cut out some of the vocals to avoid excessive repetition?
I’m in two minds about it my self i might do a few versions one without the vocals all together and try and find a new vocal and one with fewer vocals see whats the difference.br
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cheers for the advice 
Sounds really groovy, I did enjoy it. Transitions were really nice.br
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What did you use to create the plucky top part?
thanks for the comment mate :)br
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do you mean the bells sound? br
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if thats what you mean it was 2 Korg M1’s with one preset called xylophone and the other preset was called vibes from the bells and mallets folder i just took the reverbs off from the M1 and added my own with some beat repeat from Ableton at various points.br
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