Hello Sonic Academy,br
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Here is a new song that I wanted to see if I can get some feedback on. Also Thanks for the previous feedback from Phil Johnston on my track “DJ Raffi S - Feel My Body” This song I am posting is called “I Feel Alright”. It’s a mainroom house type track that I will be adding vocals too.br
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Thank you,br
DJ Raffi Sbr
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Ive attached some tidied up chords and melody and bassbr
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your initial ones sounded good I just though they sounded a bit messy and unnecessarily complicated.br
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Thanks for the feedback, Just wanted to make sure that you had sent me an AIF file a part of my song. Is that correct because I had a tough time opening up the zip file you had attached.br
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DJ Raffi S
Its an ableton project file. If you dont have ableton grab the demo… You can export the midi parts from the project.
I applied the changes that you had told me to fix and here it is :br
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Let me know what you think of the track now.br
Thanks,br
DJ Raffi Sbr
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I really like the feel of the track, its defo got that Main Room happy vibe! :Dbr
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You’ve got some really nice chords goin on, my feet were tapping all the way through and its arranged very well with great builds. br
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I think the kick sounds a little distorted, especially on the 2nd and 4th (might be the snare that’s causing the distorted effect) not sure if that’s what you’re goin for.br
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Overall though I really like it and can defo picture it goin well with some vocals over the top 