https://soundcloud.com/conorharr1s/conor-harris-lesson-in-minimal
I thought it was really good until the hats came in about 1 min into the clip on soundcloud, i thought it needed something a little more exciting and bigger than the hats at that point.br
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Think it would have been nice to have a longer break with the vocal after about 2 mins as well.br
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So i think with just some small changes to the sounds and perhaps a bit more work on the arrangement this would be something that i would say is fit for a release.
Good sounding track pal, Im not a fan of the wooden block sound that comes in just after 1 min though. the rest of the percs seem good though.
I really liked this. Not my usual sort of music but it has a great groove to it.br
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Good work 
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the white could be a little more present. the kick could have more bass (add an eq and lower the hi frequencies and higher the loew frequencies a little).br
perc is very nice. i like the bass but try to make a little bass melody out of it, its the same note all the time. i like the vocals very much.br
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add a progressive synth to it and use it like a percussion, i think that would give the track more personality. br
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good job so far